Critique, huh? OK! Here goes: Luna's awesome pose is adorable yet so sweet & innocent! What's next? The paws and feet are well detailed and the facial expression makes her cuter! The bushy tail and red hairdo are also a cool and neat design: Beautiful and nice! "Girls are tougher in black!" That is so true with Luna here! If she were to take karate classes, Luna would be an excellent fighter! This is what I predict for her, so think about it!
Overall, Luna looks awesome, she's a great friend for anyone and she's definitely ready to take on the world! GO GET 'EM, LUNA! I'M ROOTING FOR YA!